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Writing Tips
Contrary to what some people seem to believe, simple writing is not the product of simple minds. A simple, unpretentious style has both grace and power. By not calling attention to itself, it allows the reader to focus on the message.
– Richard Lederer and Richard Dowis, Sleeping Dogs Don’t Lay
Word choice
Often you can replace “big” words with shorter—even more expressive— alternatives. Simpler words typically make your message more readable.
abundance
plenty
accommodate
adapt, allow, adjust, fit
at that point in time
then
at the present time
now
accomplish
achieve, perform, succeed
accordingly
so
additional
added, more, extra
additionally
and, also
advance planning
planning
approximately
about, almost, nearly
ascertain
check
conclusion
end
demonstrate
show
endeavor
try
frequently
often
in conjunction with
with
in order to
to
initiate
begin
inquire
ask
necessitate
require, force
obtain
get
period of time
time, period
provided that, in the event that
if
purchase
buy
regardless of the fact that
although
terminate
end, close, stop, halt
Sunday, Monday timeframe
Sunday, Monday
utilize
use
Exception to the “keep it simple” rule: a person may be unsuitable for a particular job or office, but not unfit. Choose the best word for each situation.
Voice and tone
For more on our NAU brand voice and tone, visit the NAU Brand Center.
Active and passive voice
active voice – The subject performs the action the verb conveys: John calculates the solution (subject-verb-object).
passive voice – The object of the action becomes the subject. The passive voice always contains a form of the verbs to be or to get. The subject-verb-object order is inverted; the direct object becomes the subject.
Examples
The solution was calculated correctly.
Better: Tammy calculated the solution.
The class is being taught by a visiting professor.
Better: A visiting professor teaches the class.
Avoid using the passive voice unnecessarily; it creates wordy constructions and often introduces ambiguity about who performed the action.